## Errata

### Introduction

We have taken our unique opportunity to correct errors and to enforce a standard of English usage. We list our changes here. If you see anything that needs correction, please contact the Project Aon Staff.

### Errata

(Timeline of Notable Events in Magnamund) Changed ‘Zha-zing’ to ‘Zha-zhing’. Changed ‘Shararak’ to ‘Shasarak’. Changed ‘MS 5101 Kalte, Sommerlund and Durenor’ to ‘MS 5101 Kalte, Sommerlund, and Durenor’. Replaced ‘Xo-Lin’s great-great-grandson’ with ‘Xo-lin’s great-great-grandson’. Replaced ‘MS 5088 Vaduzhan, Bhanar and Chai’ with ‘MS 5088 Vaduzhan, Bhanar, and Chai’. Replaced ‘formerly’ with ‘formally’. Replaced ‘MS 5098 Lencia, Nyras and Nyvoz’ with ‘MS 5098 Lencia, Nyras and, Nyvoz’. Replaced ‘Eru, Lencia, Kasland, Boden and Bor’ with ‘Eru, Lencia, Kasland, Boden, and Bor’. Replaced ‘from the ruins of Cragmantle on the Skaror border, all the way to’ with ‘from the ruins of Cragmantle on the Skaror border all the way to’. Replaced ‘Port of Suhn’ with ‘the Port of Suhn’.

(The Story So Far …) Replaced ‘Spring’ with ‘spring’. Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘álite’. Replaced ‘battlements, towers and gleaming porticos’ with ‘battlements, towers, and gleaming porticos’. Replaced ‘Your pride is tinged with apprehension for you’ with ‘Your pride is tinged with apprehension, for you’. Replaced ‘more-psychically’ with ‘more psychically’. Replaced ‘is readiness’ with ‘in readiness’. Replaced ‘decent towards’ with ‘descent towards’. Replaced ‘powered-down’ with ‘powered down’. Replaced ‘Black Hawk, Star Lynx, Steel Hand and Swift Sword’ with ‘Black Hawk, Star Lynx, Steel Hand, and Swift Sword’. Replaced ‘The Maakengorge, the Kraknalorg Chasm, The Dark Realm of Ruel, the ruins of Cragmantle, Ljuk, The Danarg, the city of Shadaki and the Doomlands of Naaros’ with ‘The Maakengorge, the Kraknalorg Chasm, the Dark Realm of Ruel, the ruins of Cragmantle, Ljuk, the Danarg, the city of Shadaki, and the Doomlands of Naaros’. Replaced ‘Naaros. All of these places’ with ‘Naaros: All of these places’. Replaced ‘forces hungry’ with ‘forces, hungry’. Replaced ‘young Khea-Khan’s’ with ‘young Khea-khan’s’. Replaced ‘that destroys them utterly leaving no trace’ with ‘that destroys them, utterly leaving no trace’. Replaced ‘southeast’ with ‘south-east’. Replaced ‘Zahsnor’s’ with ‘Zashnor’s’.

(The Game Rules) Removed ‘that you will find in the front of this book. For ease of use, and for further adventuring, it is recommended that you photocopy these pages’. Removed ‘on the last page of this book’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘ie’ with ‘i.e.’. Replaced ‘fall to zero’ with ‘fall to zero or below’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘weapons and’ with ‘weapons, and’. Replaced ‘normal weapons’ with ‘normal Weapons’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf New Order series’ with ‘Lone Wolf New Order series’. Replaced ‘New Order adventure’ with ‘New Order adventure’.

(Your Kai Name) Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Removed ‘You can record your personal Kai name on the book plate which appears on the inside front cover of this book.’.

(New Order Kai Grand Master Disciplines) Replaced ‘Elementalism and Bardsmanship’ with ‘Elementalism, and Bardsmanship’. Replaced ‘Bautar and Dessi’ with ‘Bautar, and Dessi’. Replaced ‘Magi Magic’ with ‘Magi-magic’. Replaced ‘remove or’ with ‘remove, or’. Replaced ‘dialect and’ with ‘dialect, and’. Replaced ‘Weapon and’ with ‘Weapon, and’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘1 to 3’ with ‘one to three’. Replaced ‘For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.’ with ‘For every adventure that you complete successfully in the New Order series while possessing the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery, you will gain proficiency with one additional weapon.’. Replaced ‘Fire and’ with ‘Fire, and’. Replaced ‘battle wounds’ with ‘battle-wounds’. Added ‘ If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.’ to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced ‘fortresses increases’ with ‘fortresses increase’. Replaced ‘Duration of the spirit-walk, and the protection afforded to his inanimate body, increases’ with ‘Duration of the spirit-walk and the protection afforded to his in animate body increase’. Replaced ‘predictions increases’ with ‘predictions increase’. Replaced ‘will be of use’ with ‘may be of use’. Added ‘If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 points to any number you pick from the Random Number Table, when using the Bow.’ from the Equipment section. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf (New Order) series’ with ‘Lone Wolf New Order series’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘New Order series’ with ‘New Order series’. Replaced ‘New Order adventure’ with ‘New Order adventure’. Replaced ‘any other Special Items that’ with ‘any other Special Items and Backpack Items that’.

(Equipment) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘Lone Wolf’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘eg,’ with ‘e.g.’. Replaced ‘combat, therefore’ with ‘combat; therefore’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Removed ‘(see the inside front cover of this book)’. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section ‘Equipment—How to use it’. Replaced ‘Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow’ with ‘Grand Weaponmastery with Bow’. Replaced ‘a sword or an axe’ with ‘a Sword or an Axe’. Replaced ‘weapons’ with ‘Weapons’. Replaced ‘weapon’ with ‘Weapon’. Removed ‘If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the Random Number Table, when using the Bow.’. Replaced ‘record these on your Weapons List’ with ‘record these on your Action Chart’ for clarity. Replaced ‘the total sum of’ with ‘the number of’. Replaced ‘Disciplines then’ with ‘Disciplines, then’. Replaced ‘normal weapons’ with ‘normal Weapons’. Replaced ‘New Order adventures’ with ‘New Order adventures’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘weapon’ with ‘Weapon’ in the ‘Equipment—How to Use It’ section. Added ‘You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.’ in harmony with the Collector’s Edition. Added ‘It cannot be used to increase ENDURANCE points immediately prior to a combat.’ in harmony with the Collector’s Edition. Replaced ‘four’ with ‘five’ in line with the Collector’s Edition. Added the section How Much Can You Carry?.

(Kai Weapons) Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Replaced ‘new-found’ with ‘newfound’. Removed ‘at the front of the book’. Replaced ‘magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword’ with ‘magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword’. Replaced ‘axe “Alema” ’ with ‘Axe “Alema” ’. Added ‘(these bonuses are not cumulative)’ in harmony with the Collector’s Edition. Replaced ‘when used versus magicians’ with ‘when used against magicians or creatures born of magic’ in harmony with the Collector’s Edition.

(Rules for Combat) Removed ‘on the inside back cover of this book’. Replaced ‘on the page after the Random Number Table’ with ‘in the back of this book’. Replaced ‘points reduced’ with ‘points possibly reduced’. Replaced ‘to zero’ with ‘to zero or below’. Replaced ‘at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead’ with ‘at which point that combatant is declared dead’. Replaced ‘only you’ with ‘only you’.

(Levels of New Order Grand Mastership) Removed parentheses from around ‘You begin the New Order adventures at this level of Kai Grand Mastery’. Replaced ‘rank and titles’ with ‘ranks and titles’. Replaced ‘New Order series’ with ‘New Order series’. Replaced ‘New Order adventures’ with ‘New Order adventures’.

(Improved Grand Master Disciplines) Replaced ‘ ‘Improved Grand Master Disciplines’ ’ with ‘Improved Grand Master Disciplines’. Replaced ‘ie,’ with ‘i.e.’. Replaced ‘Mindfort’ with ‘Mindfort’. Replaced ‘Brotherhood spells’ with ‘Brotherhood Spells’. Replaced ‘1 metre’ with ‘three feet’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf New Order series’ with ‘Lone Wolf New Order series’. Replaced ‘affected, and the duration of the effect, increases’ with ‘affected—and the duration of the effect—increases’. Replaced ‘affected, and the duration of effect, both increase’ with ‘affected and the duration of effect both increase’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf New Order books’ with ‘Lone Wolf New Order books’. Replaced ‘Speed—by casting’ with ‘Speed—By casting’. Replaced ‘Power Strike—can be cast’ with ‘Power Strike—Can be cast’. Replaced ‘Illumination—creates’ with ‘Illumination—Creates’. Replaced ‘Bridge—creates’ with ‘Bridge—Creates’. Replaced ‘Sun Knights who possess Mastery’ with ‘Sun Knights who possess mastery’. Replaced ‘boulders etc.’ with ‘boulders, etc.’. Replaced ‘mid air’ with ‘mid-air’.

(New Order Wisdom) Replaced ‘Khea Khan’s’ with ‘Khea-khan’s’ and both instances of ‘Khea Khan’ with ‘Khea-khan’. Replaced ‘gods Kai and Ishir’ with ‘Gods Kai and Ishir’. Replaced ‘New Order adventure’ with ‘New Order adventure’.

(All numbered sections, except 253 and 350) Added ‘.’ to the end of reader choice paragraphs. Sections 50, 62, 98, 105, 113, 266, and 314 already had one choice with the appropriate punctuation.

(1) Replaced ‘woolen’ with ‘woollen’. Changed ‘6th’ to ‘sixth’. Changed ‘pre-dawn’ to ‘predawn’. Replaced ‘a padded jacket of cinnamon-coloured cotton, apple green breeches, tan leather boots and a hooded grey woollen cloak’ with ‘a padded jacket of cinnamon-coloured cotton, apple green breeches, tan leather boots and a hooded grey woollen cloak’. Replaced ‘Black Hawk, Star Lynx, Steel Hand and Swift Sword’ with ‘Black Hawk, Star Lynx, Steel Hand, and Swift Sword’. Replaced ‘Rimoah’s plan. Yet’ with ‘Rimoah’s plan, yet’. Replaced ‘hour. Yet’ with ‘hour, yet’. Replaced three instances of ‘Bo’sun Durin’ with ‘bo’sun Durin’. Replaced ‘northwesterly’ with ‘north-westerly’.

(2) Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’. Replaced ‘reach to your weapon’ with ‘reach for your weapon’.

(3) Replaced ‘potholed’ with ‘pot-holed’. Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced both instances of ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’. Replaced three instances of ‘Doomwolves’ with ‘doomwolves’.

(8) Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘Hail Chengu!’ with ‘Hail, Chengu!’. Replaced ‘you bring your horse to a halt behind the wagon, dismount and tether its reins’ with ‘you bring your horse to a halt behind the wagon, dismount, and tether its reins’.

(9) Replaced ‘you know who this is; Nadziran Zashor!’ with ‘you know who this is: Nadziran Zashor!’.

(10) Replaced ‘eat, rest and recover’ with ‘eat, rest, and recover’. Replaced ‘ “We’ll camp here for the night” says Quang’ with ‘ “We’ll camp here for the night,” says Quang’. Replaced ‘roots, fungi and berries’ with ‘roots, fungi, and berries’.

(11) Replaced ‘strength as you can muster’ with ‘strength you can muster’.

(13) Changed ‘50ft’ to ‘50 ft.’. Changed ‘Weaponshop’ to ‘Weapon Shop’ (cf. Section 221). Replaced ‘backpack items’ with ‘Backpack Items’.

(14) Replaced ‘Doomwolves’ with ‘doomwolves’.

(15) Changed ‘1/6th’ to ‘⅙’ and multiple occurrences of ‘5/6ths’ to ‘⅚’.

(16) Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘Doomwolves’ with ‘doomwolves’.

(17) Replaced both occurrences of ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’.

(18) Replaced ‘retrieve, string and draw and arrow’ with ‘retrieve, string, and draw an Arrow’. Replaced both instances of ‘bow’ with ‘bow’. Replaced ‘chosen’ with ‘chosen.’.

(19) Replaced ‘woodman’s’ with ‘woodsman’s’. Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(20) Replaced ‘boots, backpack and cape’ with ‘boots, backpack and cape’.

(20) Replaced ‘Jian Tzu, Herbwarden Zautro and Lord Honos’ with ‘Jian Tzu, Herbwarden Zautro, and Lord Honos’.

(22) Replaced ‘Kai Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Kai Grand Master Discipline’.

(23) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(24) Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘water’ with ‘oil’.

(25) Switched the section numbers of the first two choices (i.e. 51 and 319) to match the skill levels of Sun Thane and Grand Thane.

(28) Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Starget a new paragraph after ‘deadly creatures.’.

(29) Replaced ‘Magnakai discipline’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline’.

(30) Replaced ‘woodman’s’ with ‘woodsman’s’. Replaced ‘pole arm’ with ‘polearm’.

(30) Replaced ‘a loaf of bread, some strips of cured lamb meat, some dried fruits and a small bottle of rice wine’ with ‘a loaf of bread, some strips of cured lamb meat, some dried fruits, and a small bottle of rice wine’.

(31) Replaced ‘gulley’ with ‘gully’. Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced both instances of ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’. Replaced ‘Doomwolves’ with ‘doomwolves’.

(32) Replaced ‘Turn 181’ with ‘Turn to 181’. Replaced ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’.

(33) Changed ‘1/6th’ to ‘⅙’ and multiple occurrences of ‘5/6ths’ to ‘⅚’.

(35) Replaced ‘Magnakai discipline’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline’.

(37) Replaced ‘ENDURANCE points you lose’ with ‘ENDURANCE points (if any) you lose’.

(38) Replaced ‘Backpack items’ with ‘Backpack items’.

(39) Replaced ‘turn 94’ with ‘turn to 94’.

(40) Replaced ‘a bunk, chart table, swivel-backed captain’s chair and mahogany cabinets’ with ‘a bunk, chart table, swivel-backed captain’s chair, and mahogany cabinets’.

(42) Replaced ‘ “We cannot go on in this direction, my Lord” ’ with ‘ “We cannot go on in this direction, my Lord,” ’.

(43) Replaced ‘backpack items’ with ‘Backpack Items’. Replaced ‘Mindblast, Psi-surge and Kai-surge, by adding’ with ‘Mindblast, Psi-surge, and Kai-surge by adding’. Replaced ‘ “Ferry House Inn” ’ with ‘Ferry House Inn.’.

(45) Replaced ‘50ft’ with ‘50 ft.’. Replaced ‘backpack items’ with ‘Backpack Items’. Added ‘ Restores 4 ENDURANCE when swallowed after combat.’.

(46) Replaced ‘it is has been’ with ‘it has been’. Replaced ‘Magnakai discipline’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline’.

(47) Replaced ‘Magnakai discipline’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline’. Replaced ‘Grand Master disciplines’ with ‘Grand Master Disciplines’. Replaced ‘Doomwolves’ with ‘doomwolves’.

(48) Replaced four instances of ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’.

(49) Replaced ‘4th’ with ‘fourth’. Replaced ‘3rd’ with ‘third’.

(50) Replaced all instances of ‘7th’ with ‘seventh’. Replaced ‘8th’ with ‘eighth’.

(51) Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘to your weapon’ with ‘for your weapon’.

(52) Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(53) Replaced ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’.

(54) Replaced ‘Queng’ with ‘Quang’. Replaced ‘sixth sense ’ with ‘Sixth Sense ’.

(55) Replaced ‘birdsong’ with ‘bird song’. Replaced ‘pole arm’ with ‘polearm’. Replaced ‘you and set off’ with ‘you and Anseng set off’. Replaced ‘The rain and thunder have ceased but the slowly brightening sky is heavy with thick grey cloud.’ with ‘The rain and thunder have ceased, but the slowly brightening sky is heavy with thick grey clouds.’. Replaced ‘the Hyunsei Foothills, the Voxai Swamp and the Huzang Forest’ with ‘the Hyunsei Foothills, the Voxai Swamp, and the Huzang Forest’.

(56) Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced both instances of ‘Doomwolves’ with ‘doomwolves’. Replaced three instances of ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.

(58) Replaced ‘traveling’ with ‘travelling’. Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(61) Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘syphon’ with ‘siphon’.

(62) Added a quotation mark at the end of the paragraph starting with ‘When he was a young boy,’.

(63) Replaced ‘Word of Power Kai! And’ with ‘Word of Power Kai! and’. Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘worshiped’ with ‘worshipped’.

(64) Replaced ‘preference; stay’ with ‘preference: stay’.

(65) Replaced ‘Magnakai discipline’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline’.

(66) Replaced ‘4th round’ with ‘fourth round’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Curing your misfortune’ with ‘Cursing your misfortune’.

(67) Replaced ‘Instinctively, draw’ with ‘Instinctively, you draw’. Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(69) Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(70) Replaced both instances of ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(71) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’.

(72) Replaced ‘Quang, Bai and Chao’ with ‘Quang, Bai, and Chao’.

(73) Replaced ‘50ft length’ with ‘50 ft. length’. Replaced ‘backpack items’ with ‘Backpack Items’. Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Added ‘ Restores 4 ENDURANCE when swallowed after combat.’.

(74) Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘bow’. Replaced all instances of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(76) Replaced ‘backpack items’ with ‘Backpack Items’.

(77) Replaced ‘Hi’Joi’ with ‘Hi’joi’. Replaced ‘ “One moment, my Lord”, he says’ with ‘ “One moment, my Lord,” he says’. Replaced ‘ “Come a little closer” ’ with ‘ “Come a little closer,” ’. Replaced ‘ “Of course, my Lord”, replies Shousun’ with ‘ “Of course, my Lord,” replies Shousun’.

(78) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’.

(79) Added a quotation mark at the end of the phrase ‘Steady, my Lord,’. Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’. Replaced ‘Backpack Items’ with ‘Backpack Items’. Replaced ‘the teeming rain, the howling winds and the rolling thunder’ with ‘the teeming rain, the howling winds, and the rolling thunder’.

(80) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘ “Kai!” ’ with ‘Kai!’.

(81) Replaced ‘ENDURANCE points you lose’ with ‘ENDURANCE points (if any) you lose’.

(82) Replaced ‘Magnakai discipline’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline’.

(83) Replaced both instances of ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’.

(84) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.

(86) Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’. Replaced ‘Doomwolves’ with ‘doomwolves’.

(87) Added a quotation mark at the end of the phrase ‘Hah!’ and replaced ‘Snorts’ with ‘snorts’.

(88) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’.

(89) Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘Mind over Matter’ with ‘Mind Over Matter’.

(90) Replaced ‘Magnakai discipline’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline’. Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(91) Replaced ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’. Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(91) Replaced both instances of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.

(92) Replaced ‘gulley’ with ‘gully’. Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘Doomwolves’ with ‘doomwolves’.

(93) Replaced ‘woodman’s’ with ‘woodsman’s’.

(96) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(97) Replaced ‘steamed rice, fresh vegetables and diced lamb’ with ‘steamed rice, fresh vegetables, and diced lamb’. Replaced ‘says Tzu, “ after all … ” ’ with ‘says Tzu, “after all … ” ’.

(98) Replaced ‘traveling’ with ‘travelling’.

(99) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.

(100) Replaced ‘7th round’ with ‘seventh round’. Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(101) Replaced ‘Magnakai discipline’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’.

(102) Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(103) Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.

(104) Replaced both instances of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.

(105) Replaced ‘buys, sells and prepares’ with ‘buys, sells and prepares’. Replaced ‘backpack items’ with ‘Backpack Items’. Replaced ‘Increases the effect of Mindblast, Psi-surge and Kai-surge, by adding’ with ‘Increases the effect of Mindblast, Psi-surge, and Kai-surge by adding’.

(106) Replaced ‘ “My compliments, Grand Master” ’ with ‘ “My compliments, Grand Master,” ’. Replaced ‘Greetings Grand Master’ with ‘Greetings, Grand Master’. Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(107) Replaced ‘Khea-Khan’ with ‘Khea-khan’. Replaced ‘the Captain, Lord Honos and Herbwarden Zautro’ with ‘the Captain, Lord Honos, and Herbwarden Zautro’. Replaced ‘They have gone but they will never be forgotten.’ with ‘They have gone, but they will never be forgotten.’.

(108) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’. Replaced ‘What is it, my Lord’ with ‘What is it, my Lord?’.

(109) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(110) Replaced ‘This is a valuable item, and therefore I must request that you wager a minimum of 100 Ren (10 Gold Crowns).’ with ‘ “This is a valuable item, and therefore I must request that you wager a minimum of 100 Ren.”.’. Replaced ‘If you have 10 Gold Crowns’ with ‘If you have 100 Ren (10 Gold Crowns)’.

(111) Replaced ‘camp fire’ with ‘campfire’. Replaced ‘Queng’ with ‘Quang’. Replaced ‘woodman’s’ with ‘woodsman’s’. Replaced ‘berries, nuts and edible flora’ with ‘berries, nuts, and edible flora’.

(112) Replaced ‘Port of Suhn’ with ‘the Port of Suhn’.

(113) Replaced ‘ “Please, gentlemen, introduce yourselves to our famous guest” ’ with ‘ “Please, gentlemen, introduce yourselves to our famous guest,” ’.

(114) Placed Madam Dai-zia’s speech inside a block quote element and removed the quotation mark at the beginning of the first paragraph and at the end of the last. Added an apostrophe to the phrase ‘three minutes’ time’. Added a period to the end of the last paragraph. Replaced ‘You take their seats, remove your backpacks and stow them’ with ‘You take their seats, remove your backpacks, and stow them’. Replaced both instances of ‘sand timer’ with ‘hourglass’. Added periods to end of the three sentences describing the inscriptions on the boxes.

(115) Replaced ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’. Replaced ‘Doomwolves’ with ‘doomwolves’. Replaced both instances of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced both instances of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’.

(116) Replaced ‘Weapomnmastery’ with ‘Weaponmastery’. Replaced all instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(120) Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘Magnakai discipline’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline’. Replaced ‘a wiry man old man’ with ‘a wiry old man’. Replaced ‘casks of wines, spirits and exotic liqueurs’ with ‘casks of wine, spirits, and exotic liqueurs’.

(121) Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(122) Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(123) Added a quotation mark at the end of the phrase ‘Steady, my Lord,’. Replaced ‘Backpack Items’ with ‘Backpack Items’.

(124) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’.

(125) Replaced ‘it should be recorded it in the Weapons section’ with ‘it should be recorded in the Weapons section’.

(131) Replaced both instances of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘2nd round’ with ‘second round’. Replaced ‘loudly. But it’ with ‘loudly, but it’.

(133) Replaced ‘southeast’ with ‘south-east’.

(134) Replaced ‘gulley’ with ‘gully’. Replaced both instances of ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’. Replaced both instances of ‘Doomwolves’ with ‘doomwolves’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(135) Replaced ‘leather jacket, black breeches, sturdy black boots and a dark green oilskin cape’ with ‘leather jacket, black breeches, sturdy black boots, and a dark green oilskin cape’.

(137) Replaced ‘north east’ with ‘north-east’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’. Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(138) Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(141) Replaced ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’.

(142) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’. Replaced ‘It has only just got back on its feet’ with ‘It has only just gotten back on its feet’.

(144) Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(145) Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(146) Replaced ‘distain’ with ‘disdain’.

(148) Replaced ‘pole arm’ with ‘polearm’. Replaced ‘south east’ with ‘south-east’. Replaced ‘north west’ with ‘north-west’.

(149) Replaced ‘Magnakai disciplines’ with ‘Magnakai Disciplines’. Replaced ‘turn to 180’ with ‘turn to 98’. Replaced ‘clothing, furniture and fruit’ with ‘clothing, furniture, and fruit’.

(151) Replaced ‘actives’ with ‘activates’. Replaced ‘Anseng, Chao and Lieutenant Quang’ with ‘Anseng, Chao, and Lieutenant Quang’.

(153) Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced both instances of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.

(154) Replaced ‘ “Come a little closer”,’ with ‘ “Come a little closer,” ’. Replaced ‘ “Come a little closer”, he says’ with ‘ “Come a little closer,” he says’. Replaced ‘ “Of course, my Lord”, replies Shousun’ with ‘ “Of course, my Lord,” replies Shousun’.

(156) Replaced both instances of ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(157) Replaced ‘If you do not kill the Chagarashi outright with your single blow’ with ‘If you do not kill the Chagarashi outright with your single blow and lose the same or fewer ENDURANCE points than the Chagarashi’. Replaced ‘ENDRANCE’ with ‘ENDURANCE’.

(159) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.

(162) Replaced ‘Magnakai discipline’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline’.

(163) Replaced ‘woodman’s’ with ‘woodsman’s’. Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(165) Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’. Replaced ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’. Replaced both instances of ‘Doomwolves’ with ‘doomwolves’. Replaced both instances of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.

(166) Replaced ‘Angseng’s’ with ‘Anseng’s’.

(167) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(169) Replaced ‘oilskin cloak, your boots and your backpack’ with ‘oilskin cloak, your boots, and your backpack’.

(170) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(171) Replaced ‘50ft length’ with ‘50 ft. length’. Replaced ‘backpack items’ with ‘Backpack Items’. Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Added ‘ Restores 4 ENDURANCE when swallowed after combat.’.

(172) Changed ‘1/6th’ to ‘⅙’ and multiple occurrences of ‘5/6ths’ to ‘⅚’.

(174) Divided the paragraph beginning ‘You may add 6 points’ in two. Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(175) Replaced ‘nightfall,’ with ‘nightfall?’. Replaced ‘Queng’ with ‘Quang’.

(176) Replaced ‘Backpack items’ with ‘Backpack Items’.

(177) Replaced both instances of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.

(179) Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(181) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’. Replaced ‘gulley’ with ‘gully’. Replaced all instances of ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’. Replaced three instances of ‘Doomwolves’ with ‘doomwolves’. Replaced ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’.

(182) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.

(183) Replaced ‘ “As I thought”, he says’ with ‘ “As I thought,” he says’.

(184) Replaced both instances of ‘Quang, Bai and Deng’ with ‘Quang, Bai, and Deng’. Replaced ‘With a wave, Shen-yin’ with ‘With a wave, Shen-Yin’.

(185) Replaced ‘backpack items’ with ‘Backpack Items’. Replaced ‘Mindblast, Psi-surge and Kai-surge’ with ‘Mindblast, Psi-surge, and Kai-surge’.

(188) Replaced the first two instances of ‘kirusami’ with ‘Kirusami’. Replaced ‘discipline of Mind over Matter’ with ‘Discipline of Mind Over Matter’.

(189) Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.

(191) Replaced ‘turn 94’ with ‘turn to 94’.

(192) Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(194) Replaced ‘ENDRANCE’ with ‘ENDURANCE’.

(194) Replaced four instances of ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’.

(196) Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(197) Replaced ‘pole arm’ with ‘polearm’.

(198) Replaced both occurrences of ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’. Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’.

(199) Replaced both instances of ‘backpack items’ with ‘Backpack Items’. Replaced ‘Mindblast, Psi-surge and Kai-surge’ with ‘Mindblast, Psi-surge, and Kai-surge’.

(200) Replaced ‘Backpack items’ with ‘Backpack Items’.

(202) Replaced ‘ “Hail, sir” says Quang’ with ‘ “Hail, sir,” says Quang’.

(203) Replaced ‘Both of them turn their heads, recognise the familiar face of Lieutenant Quang and immediately stand up and salute him.’ with ‘Both of them turn their heads, recognise the familiar face of Lieutenant Quang, and immediately stand up and salute him.’.

(207) Split the paragraph beginning ‘You may add 6 points’ in two. Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(208) Changed ‘Weaponshop’ to ‘Weapon Shop’ (cf. Section 221).

(210) Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(211) Replaced both instances of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(213) Replaced ‘clothing, furniture and fruit’ with ‘clothing, furniture, and fruit’. Replaced ‘turn to 180’ with ‘turn to 98’. Replaced ‘bought, bartered and sold’ with ‘bought, bartered, and sold’.

(215) Replaced ‘turn 94’ with ‘turn to 94’.

(216) Replaced ‘Chao, Bai and Deng’ with ‘Chao, Bai, and Deng’.

(217) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(219) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced both instances of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(220) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’.

(222) Replaced both instances of ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(223) Replaced ‘Magnakai discipline’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline’.

(224) Replaced ‘forcing them run’ with ‘forcing to them run’. Replaced ‘Magnakai discipline’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline’.

(225) Replaced ‘ “It can be yours for only 200 Ren” (20 Gold Crowns)’ with ‘ “It can be yours for only 200 Ren.” ’. Replaced ‘If you wish to buy this Wardstone’ with ‘If you wish to buy this Wardstone for 200 Ren (20 Gold Crowns)’.

(228) Replaced ‘on the edge of walkway’ with ‘on the edge of the walkway’. Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘If you total is now 4 or lower’ with ‘If your total is now 4 or lower’.

(230) Replaced ‘Magnakai discipline’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline’. Replaced ‘reach to your weapon’ with ‘reach for your weapon’.

(233) Replaced ‘as it head sinks’ with ‘as its head sinks’. Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’. Replaced ‘Doomwolves’ with ‘doomwolves’.

(234) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced both instances of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(235) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘ships’ with ‘ship’s’.

(236) Replaced ‘Doomwolves’ with ‘doomwolves’.

(237) Replaced both instances of ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(238) Replaced both instances ‘Port of Suhn’ with ‘the Port of Suhn’. Added a quotation mark at the end of the phrase ‘Grand Master,’. Replaced ‘Silver Virixe’ with ‘Silver Virixe’. Replaced ‘Grand Master disciplines’ with ‘Grand Master Disciplines’. Replaced ‘ “Silver Virixe” ’ with ‘Silver Virixe’.

(239) Replaced ‘You are little than a mile’ with ‘You are little more than a mile’.

(240) Replaced ‘ENDRANCE’ with ‘ENDURANCE’.

(241) Added a quotation mark at the end of the phrase ‘Thank you very much,’. Replaced ‘she a lot prettier’ with ‘she’s a lot prettier’.

(242) Replaced ‘Chagarashi Scouts (x2)’ with ‘2 Chagarashi Scouts’.

(243) Replaced ‘creature chest’ with ‘creature’s chest’. Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘you flick the reins and the team set off’ with ‘you flick the reins, and the team sets off’.

(245) Replaced ‘Sheni’ with ‘Shen’. Replaced ‘50ft length’ with ‘50 ft. length’. Replaced ‘backpack items’ with ‘Backpack Items’. Added ‘ Restores 4 ENDURANCE when swallowed after combat.’.

(248) Replaced ‘pole arm’ with ‘polearm’.

(250) Replaced all instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.

(251) Replaced ‘Jougong’ with ‘jougong’.

(252) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’. Replaced ‘gulley’ with ‘gully’. Replaced all instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced three instances of ‘Doomwolves’ with ‘doomwolves’. Replaced ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’.

(254) Replaced ‘The curtain is draw aside’ with ‘The curtain is drawn aside’.

(255) Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(256) Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(257) Replaced ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’.

(258) Replaced ‘backpack items’ with ‘Backpack Items’.

(261) Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(262) Replaced ‘horse rear up’ with ‘horse rears up’. Replaced ‘turn to 218’ with ‘turn to 246’.

(263) Replaced ‘Magnakai discipline’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline’. Replaced ‘Grand Master disciplines’ with ‘Grand Master Disciplines’. Replaced both instances of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘beast plate’ with ‘breast plate’.

(267) Replaced ‘It is Gold Necklace’ with ‘It is a Gold Necklace’.

(264) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’. Replaced ‘gulley’ with ‘gully’. Replaced all instances of ‘Grand Master discipline(s)’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline(s)’. Replaced three instances of ‘Doomwolves’ with ‘doomwolves’. Replaced ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’.

(265) Replaced ‘4th round’ with ‘fourth round’.

(267) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’.

(268) Replaced ‘Chagarashi Scouts (x2)’ with ‘2 Chagarashi Scouts’. Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(270) Replaced ‘Zasnhor’ with ‘Zashnor’. Replaced ‘Hi’Joi’ with ‘Hi’joi’.

(271) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(272) Replaced ‘Angseng’s’ with ‘Anseng’s’.

(273) Replaced ‘fulfill’ with ‘fulfil’. Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’. Replaced ‘in Gazad Helkona .’ with ‘in Gazad Helkona.’.

(275) Replaced ‘it is has been’ with ‘it has been’. Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(280) Replaced ‘envelopes, slips of paper and sticks of charcoal’ with ‘envelopes, slips of paper, and sticks of charcoal’.

(282) Replaced ‘make direct mind contact him’ with ‘make direct mind contact with him’. Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(283) Replaced ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’.

(284) Replaced ‘ “What is it, my Lord” he says’ with ‘ “What is it, my Lord?” he says’.

(285) Replaced ‘a bunk, an oak table, an ornately carved high-backed Mythenian chair and a toa wood chest of drawers’ with ‘a bunk, an oak table, an ornately carved high-backed Mythenian chair, and a toa wood chest of drawers’. Replaced ‘discipline of Mind over Matter’ with ‘Discipline of Mind Over Matter’.

(286) Replaced ‘says Tzu, “ after all the help … ” ’ with ‘says Tzu, “after all the help … ” ’.

(287) Replaced ‘Doomwolves’ with ‘doomwolves’.

(288) Replaced ‘restores to you 5 ENDURANCE points’ with ‘restores 5 ENDURANCE points’.

(290) Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’. Replaced ‘129’ with ‘turn to 129’.

(293) Replaced ‘Grand Master Discipline of Nexus’ with ‘Discipline of Grand Nexus’. Replaced all instances of ‘discipline(s)’ with ‘Discipline(s)’.

(294) Replaced ‘grass, shrubs and reeds’ with ‘grass, shrubs, and reeds’. Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘Grand Master Discipline of Huntmastery’ with ‘Discipline of Grand Huntmastery’.

(295) Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(297) Replaced ‘a crimson leather jacket, black breeches, sturdy black boots and a dark green oilskin cape’ with ‘a crimson leather jacket, black breeches, sturdy black boots, and a dark green oilskin cape’. Replaced ‘backpack and weapons’ with ‘Backpack, and Weapons’.

(299) Replaced ‘Meal.)You’ with ‘Meal.) You’. Replaced ‘Shousan’ with ‘Shousun’. Replaced ‘Soushan’ with ‘Shousun’. Replaced ‘Zhou-Yin’ with ‘Zhou-yin’. Replaced ‘Quang, Bai and Deng’ with ‘Quang, Bai, and Deng’.

(308) Replaced ‘with kitchen knife’ with ‘with a kitchen knife’.

(301) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced three instances of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’.

(302) Replaced ‘Magnakai discipline’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline’.

(303) Replaced ‘ “10 Ren” he says’ with ‘ “10 Ren,” he says’. Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(304) Replaced ‘Youi’ with ‘You’. Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(307) Replaced ‘Chagarashi Scouts (x2)’ with ‘2 Chagarashi Scouts’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(309) Replaced ‘turn 338’ with ‘turn to 338’.

(310) Replaced ‘You bring your horse to a halt behind the wagon, dismount and tether its reins’ with ‘You bring your horse to a halt behind the wagon, dismount, and tether its reins’. Replaced ‘Hail Chengu!’ with ‘Hail, Chengu!’. Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(313) Replaced ‘Angseng’ with ‘Anseng’. Replaced both instances of ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(314) Added a quotation mark at the end of the paragraph starting with ‘When he was a young boy,’.

(315) Replaced ‘Doomwolf’ with ‘doomwolf’. Replaced ‘Turn 264’ with ‘Turn to 264’.

(316) Replaced ‘rangers. But’ with ‘rangers, but’. Replaced ‘Magnakai discipline’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline’.

(317) Replaced ‘Zhou-Yin’ with ‘Zhou-yin’.

(318) Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘Lone Wolf’.

(319) Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘reach to your weapon’ with ‘reach to your weapon’.

(322) Replaced ‘worshipers’ with ‘worshippers’. Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘turn to 126’ with ‘turn to 185’. Replaced ‘warmth and calmness following through you’ with ‘warmth and calmness flowing through you’.

(324) Replaced ‘ENDRANCE’ with ‘ENDURANCE’. Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’.

(325) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced ‘General Store the opposite side’ with ‘General Store on the opposite side’.

(326) Replaced ‘Grand Master Discipline of Pathsmanship’ with ‘Discipline of Grand Pathsmanship’.

(328) Replaced both instances of ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’.

(329) Replaced ‘discipline of Mind over Matter’ with ‘Discipline of Mind Over Matter’.

(330) Replaced ‘Tranquility’ with ‘Tranquillity’.

(331) Replaced ‘Doomwolf’s’ with ‘doomwolf’s’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(332) Replaced ‘Of you can unsheathe’ with ‘Or you can unsheathe’.

(333) Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’.

(334) Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’. Added ‘and restores 4 ENDURANCE when swallowed after combat.’.

(335) Replaced all three instances of ‘kirusami’ with ‘Kirusami’.

(337) Replaced ‘warmth and calmness following through you’ with ‘warmth and calmness flowing through you’. Replaced ‘worshipers’ with ‘worshippers’. Replaced ‘turn to 126’ with ‘turn to 185’.

(338) Replaced ‘There is a knock on the chamber door and Song Tao says “Enter”.’ with ‘There is a knock on the chamber door, and Song Tao says “Enter.” ’. Replaced ‘grilled fish, boiled rice and steamed vegetables’ with ‘grilled fish, boiled rice, and steamed vegetables’. Replaced ‘stunk by a bee’ with ‘stung by a bee’.

(339) Replaced ‘Backpack items’ with ‘Backpack Items’.

(344) Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Replaced ‘Turn to 135’ with ‘Turn to 297’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’.

(345) Replaced ‘turn 94’ with ‘turn to 94’.

(347) Replaced ‘from tavern’s stable’ with ‘from the tavern’s stable’. Replaced ‘Kai hunting discipline’ with ‘Kai Hunting Discipline’. Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.

(348) Replaced ‘Magnakai discipline’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline’.

(349) Replaced ‘see. Doomwolves’ with ‘see: doomwolves’. Replaced ‘southeast’ with ‘south-east’. Replaced ‘their faces taught with frustration’ with ‘their faces taut with frustration’. Replaced ‘they are wont to give up now’ with ‘they are loath to give up now’.

(350) Replaced ‘Black Hawk, Star Lynx, Steel Hand and Swift Sword’ with ‘Black Hawk, Star Lynx, Steel Hand, and Swift Sword’.